Sunday, October 10, 2010

Journal 3: In Media Res

The rows of trees, seem to lead her straight to him, as she began remembering all the emotional pain that he had caused. As she was running through the park, Sally could smell vengeance coming closer, as way ahead of her, was Kevin. She remembered the bat she had in her bag from practice, that weighed her down as the distance started to close. The heavy weight of the bag started to slow her down, as she went to catch up to him. She knew where he was going, she knew what she had to do and this is where he'd regret ever messing with her. He'd realize the pain she had to go through knowing that she had lost her best friend and a sister. He'd regret it all.

1 comment:

  1. This definitely starts us in the middle of the action....I love how vivid the idea of revenge is portrayed and this introduction definitely makes me want to read the rest of this story.

    10/10

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